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this seems alittle... forced

I don't know Jazza, you are a good artist but it seems to me that you kinda forced the vocals, and the timing on "eyes" was a little out of sync. Your voice kinda died at the first time you sing "slowy" it's too low. Your vocals also sound staccato and make me want to listen to the original song. (I think it's safe to say that covers should be able to stand on there own and be as enjoyable to listen to) it gets better at around 1:25 and flows more.

Personally (being only a violin player in a highschool orchestra as experience) I think you should attempt to master it better. Your voice is distinct from Adam Young, and I think the first part needs to flow more, rather than that staccato I mentioned above. I loved the Pico Day Song, but this can and ought to be better.

sweet

reminds me of pink floyd, keeps me focused except for the guitar

Eirun responds:

Yep, the guitar grabs attention a little too much. Thanks for the constructive criticism!

meh you tried to hard

to make this sound epic, the screams don't work to well, and the singing needs improvement... otherwise it's decent. Not epic but decent. don't try so hard

It's cool

I can hear this in a sonic game.

HyruleanHyroe responds:

Well cool! Now I can write my own music once I start programming! :)

sheet music

please for violin, viola, cello, and bass

This can't be the audio you showed me Before

It sounds good. I think this would go well with a space shooter game.

Cool

It has a sort of tropical flavor to it.

Sounds like a sonic trak

I can just see this in a sonic advance game

cool

It's kind of mega man-ish

Silliness is the only constructive output of insanity.

Age 31, Male

student

EHS go jets!!!

Nor Cal

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