Ya know what I find interesting...
I'm enjoying the dialogue in this episode especially the bazzar and the inn, I think the dialogue between zelda (Rina-chan) and link (Scoot) feels a tad awkward, now maybe you intended that, but I think that you (Scoot right? heh) and Rina-chan should work on actor chemistry. I know Rina-chan is a very requested voice-actor but I'm just saying.
In terms of animation well, this isn't Brakkenwood but it works and is well done and the story is exicuted well enough to keep me interested (plus I'm a zelda fan, that helps) so it's a-ok. the only thing that bothered me was the scene with Agligov (sp, sorry) where you pan the shot with the window the 3d effect and the character didn't match up and the window skewed awkwardly but other than that, it was cool.
Keep going until this story your brewing comes to a close. Alright!!!